The Monster Under The Bed
No one believes me they think i'm lying but it's really true.A big hairy monster live under my bed and i can prove it.
The big hairy monster will pot it's hands from out under my bed and the monster said if you go to sleep it said i will kill you so i did not go to sleep so wen the sun came up up the big monster was not there.but wen the sun went down the monster pot it's hands out from under my bed at the same time but it's hands are more out of my bed and all of the time the monster head was all most coming out of my bed.So the next day she did not go to her house and she went to her sisters house.And wen she went to her house it was not there so she went to bed and she was alright.
Friday, July 3, 2020
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Hey... I like your story telling also description like info! I like info, and I like the way how you imagined what your monster would look like...
ReplyDeleteNext time put spaces after every full-stops for e.g. I have a massive house that I like to play in. But there is one problem I can't mess around with the house.
Plus next time maybe fix your spelling put capital I's in your story's as well.
But very good story.